Neural Disconnect

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In a near-future world, a young mother fights the rebooting of her smartphone, which is now a chip in her head, because it will mean erasing her entire life, meaning her little girl.
Neural Disconnect_Draft 2_20May25.pdf (33.8 KB)

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Dear Nkosana,
triffic! All I would add is one of the men in black taking her old smartphone and chucking in into a pile with the 326 other failures! All best –

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Thanks for the feedback, highly appreciated. Apologies for taking months to respond, life you know?

Thanks again

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This was great! I especially loved the daughter’s character—she really emphasized the consequences of the neural technologies. The twist at the end left me stunned as well. Amazing job!