When a desperate frontier father turns to a witch to dowse for water during a drought, he unearths evil—and must confront a buried horror, and the price of his pride, before it devours his family from beneath the earth.
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Just read this treatment. Really stood out.
Very tense, especially in the setup and through the midpoint.
Great job, writer!
Recommend others check it out.
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Thank you for taking the time to read it—I really appreciate that.
I’m glad the tension in the setup and midpoint landed for you. That was something I spent a lot of time refining, so it means a lot to hear it connected.
Thanks as well for recommending it to others—that kind of support goes a long way.
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It’s a tough business…we gotta watch out for each other! Besides…good writing is good writing.
I have more reading to do…but, it was my highest scoring treatment, yet.
Once I finish reading treatments, I’ll circle back for the script.
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I could really feel that initial triumph when they hit water, and the slow, disturbing fall from grace that follows - and I have only read the treatment! Good work!
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This story very power ful thoughts
Feuturre water source inmporatant the world
Best story teller
Congrats
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